The short story I’d like to highlight this month is “The Weald Maiden’s Will” by Nicholas Ian Hawkins. It is published in the March edition of Every Day Fiction. Feel free to rate the story or any other story on the site. If you really enjoy the site, don’t be shy about making a donation to help cover their costs.
The first sentence of “The Weald Maiden’s Will” meanders but tells you where the main character is and what he does. It fits the tone of the story. The indirectness of Hawkins’ writing mirrors the fuzziness provided by the distant memories of the main character. For me, the ending was a surprise even though hints had been dropped.
What I found most pleasing is what Hawkins’ managed to do with the story. Some writers can do a lot or a little with 1000 words. He managed to transport me to a different time, place and way of life.
What a pleasant surprise! Thank you, Amber.
You’re welcome, Nik! I’ve been reading stories from Every Day Fiction but it came to my attention through the Bragging Rites group.